I’ve handed off the first draft of 24 minutes to my fellow co-conspirators. I’ve gotten some positive feedback from them. Now they are tasked with fixing it up, including the major plot malfunction in the middle. Oh, and they have to name the characters too. I’ve done a bit of pre-production too so I can start thinking about how many “actors” we are going to need as well as locations and any extra special equipment like “weapons”.